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How To Become Pharaoh

As my servants fanned me, I luxuriously stretched out into a comfy chair. Ahh! Being a pharaoh was the life.

'More of that delicious wine!' I commanded.

Food and drink at your command! It was better than I had ever imagined. I sipped my wine and nibbled at a pastry.

'Tell the cook that her pastry is amazing!' I demanded of another servant. The servant went scurrying off. If you had been here a few days ago, you would have discovered the king, foaming at the mouth, dead. I am his eldest son. No one will guess I killed him...

by Indie Shah (Winner) (9)
Bernards Heath Junior School - Hertfordshire

Competition - Ancient Adventures

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