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Lucy's Jungle Story

Emma and Ben were going on a long, green stick. The dog was on the long stick as well.

A snake came up. Ben and Emma were frightened of the snake.

Emma and Ben ran away from the snake. The snake was trying to gobble them up.

A friendly lion came up. Ben and Emma were scared by the lion.

The lion gave Ben and Emma ride on his bony back.

Emma and Ben said thank you for coming. They went back to their home on the lion's back.

by Lucy Billington (7)
Preesall Fleetwood's Charity CE Primary School - Lancashire

Competition - My First Story 2017

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