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In The Deep

He swims and he lurks in the watery deep

But unlike the wolf, he's not hunting for sheep.

Smaller than him he will eat any fish

But even us humans could be on his dish.

In the whole ocean

He can smell one drop of your blood.

Been swimming for a while?

Get a move on you should

Not safe in the light,

Not safe in the dark,

If you swim through his water,

You may meet - the shark.

by Rose-Mae McNulty (6)
Ashdene Primary School - Cheshire

Competition - Poetry Safari

Copyright remains with the author.