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Aiden's Jungle Story

Once upon a time there was a boy, a girl and a dog. They went to a jungle and swung through some trees and played round and round.

Behind the door was a snake who was mean. He was going to eat the children but he was too small so he couldn't run fast.

The snake tried to catch the children but the children were too fast and they ran and ran towards their home.

But they came to another jungle. In the jungle was a lion. The children were scared but it was a nice lion. The children rode on the lion. The lion ran fast.

They found a tree and in the tree was a door. They door opened and they went home.

by Aiden Jackson (6)
Bradford Academy - West Yorkshire

Competition - My First Story 2017

Copyright remains with the author.