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Luke's Magical Story

The children went to a place with a wicked castle full of traps. Will they see the wicked witch?

But there wasn't a wicked witch, there was a pretty fairy and their dog thought it was a toy as she was so little! The fairy took the children and dog near the castle, but they were scared because there was a monster...

The dog found a candy stick and the children found a cookie house. But the children didn't know the monster lived there! They went into the house and there was a party! There was cake and presents. 'For us?'

The monster came and clicked his hands, the cookie house vanished along with the presents and the house, and the dog!

by Luke Jame Ewart (6)
Michael Syddall CE (A) Primary School - North Yorkshire

Competition - My First Story 2017

Copyright remains with the author.