One sunny day, Emma and Ben were walking the dog. Suddenly, the dog started barking at a magic door hidden in a tree.
The dog found treasure in a big pile and a big coconut tree.
The a big, scary and creepy pirate said, 'That is my treasure.'
Ben said, 'We found this treasure first.'
'Ha, ha, it is mine now!'
'Hey, that's not fair, I found it first.'
Ben slipped off the plank.
Ben landed on a kind dolphin with the dog and Emma landed on a dolphin.
The dolphins got them back home to the tree house and Emma and Ben said, 'High five!'
by Olivier Kalinowski (6)
Blackhorse Primary School - Bristol
Competition - My First Story 2017
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