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Olivier's Pirate Story

One sunny day, Emma and Ben were walking the dog. Suddenly, the dog started barking at a magic door hidden in a tree.

The dog found treasure in a big pile and a big coconut tree.

The a big, scary and creepy pirate said, 'That is my treasure.'

Ben said, 'We found this treasure first.'

'Ha, ha, it is mine now!'

'Hey, that's not fair, I found it first.'

Ben slipped off the plank.

Ben landed on a kind dolphin with the dog and Emma landed on a dolphin.

The dolphins got them back home to the tree house and Emma and Ben said, 'High five!'

by Olivier Kalinowski (6)
Blackhorse Primary School - Bristol


Competition - My First Story 2017

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