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Once Upon A Dream

Silent serenity, unspeakable calm,

Floating mutely though a pale land of immortality

Unknown silhouettes slinking behind

You are never safe

Not in this world.


Fiery, blazing, fiendish fire

Unstoppable flames creeping through all boundaries

Fiery phoenix rising into the blazing flames

Basilisk's sabre teeth

Razor edges

Cutting all.


Clouds lined with silver - priceless to the last

Sitting there looking up at the golden stars

Shooting up rapidly towards the emerald sky

In a world so wonderful - how is it possible to die?

by Diana Leonova-Eliseeva (10)
Farnborough Primary School - Kent

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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