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Busy Bee

I dreamt I was in my garden looking around

Then suddenly I heard a sound

It was a bee inside a flower

He was there for about an hour

He then popped out with pollen on his chin

He gave me a smile and popped right back in.


It was a wonderful sight to see a bee

Doing his job for you and me

Bees we should never kill, swat or spray.

We need these busy bees every day

Instead we should save bees in any way

So they can help save our Earth in the same way.

by Maya Rashid (9)
Derby High School - Derbyshire

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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