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Dream Planet

I've been to some peculiar places,

Like fossil cliffs and a dry oasis.

But surely none can be weirder than

The magical land where mermaids swam?


Beneath my feet are flowers

And behind me are dragons with fabulous powers

Unicorns, Pegasus and a fairy,

Although not one is terribly scary.


You may ask where are the others?

The horrible yetis and the freakish ghouls?

Why aren't they in this mysterious land?

They're all banished to Nightmare Sand!

by Lowri Edwards (10)
Burry Port Community School - Wales

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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