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Benj And Dylan's Lucky Day

I don't quite know what happened

But it happened very quick

Me and Dylan just made a video

And it became a massive hit

The cash came rolling in

As fast as a racing tsunami

I couldn't believe my eyes

I felt like the owner of pepperoni

We started to buy a few things

I bought a Lamborghini

He bought a new guitar

Another invention, panini

We were living the life of fame

The best thing to be seen

I wish it would never end

But pop! It was just a dream!

by Benjamin Gomm (11)
Oughtrington Community Primary School - Cheshire

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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