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My Fading Nightmare

My broken heart has crevices as deep as the Atlantic.

I'm drifting on a whale of despair.

Screaming out in excruciating pain.

My heart is a loud drum

Beating slowly,




No one is as devastated.

No one is as exhausted.

No one is as separated off as Cam.

Friends, miles and miles and miles away.

May as well be a whole lifetime away.

Dr Bryce, however, is only a few metres away.

I'll do it.

I'll have a pig's heart.

I'll be able to play football and have fun.

But Dr Bryce also says it's experimental, risky and controversial.

Shall I or shan't I?

by Nathaniel Ebden (11)
Bessacarr Primary School - South Yorkshire

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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