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An Ocean Of Lost Memories

Diving in

An echoing sound

Rings constantly

Towering over my mind

Leaves me in wonder

Of my present destination


Scanning the grounds

Picturesque for the blind

Repulsive for the seeing

Sketches of infinite sorrows

Surrounded me

With an expression so downhearted

The most durable of folk would manage a river of crystal tears

Flowing endlessly



As powerful as a miraculous sorcerer

Using supernatural elements

Forcing out tears

Turning me incapacitated

No escaping

This is the ocean

The ocean of lost memories.

by Jasmine Graham (10)
Woodhouse Primary School - Manchester

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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