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The Swan Lake Dancer

I lay down and look at the sky,

Stars are glittering as I close my eyes.

When I open them I'm in another world

That nobody has entered in history,

All around me are spring flowers and trees.

I walk across the meadow and take a sniff

Of beautiful scented flowers

And far from me is a rocky cliff.

After a few paces I see a silvery lake

And filling it is swans and the lake is not opaque.

Out of nowhere I hear the music of Swan Lake

And ballerinas start dancing swiftly around me,

I feel so free.

I close my eyes and start dancing

But then I fall down, down and down.

Then I open my eyes

And I'm back in my hometown.

by Fathima Rifah Kallayil (11)
Braintcroft Primary School - London

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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