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My Escape

Imagine escaping to a land of fun,

With cheesy moon and smiley sun,

Sparkly stars and fluffy clouds,

Gathered up in friendly crowds,

If you do, I have a feeling you know

Exactly how the Dreamland goes!

With fluffy animals and pretty plants

And mushrooms which can dance!

You live in a little house

With a little friendly mouse,

There are lots of lovely trees

And a wonderful breeze.

It's my escape

From horrible scrapes,

Painful bruises

And horrible ruses,

But here I can be myself.

by Erika Walsh (9)
Carnalridge Primary School - Northern Ireland

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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