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A Magical Place

I close my eyes and what do I dream?

I dream there is a place I have never seen

A magical place that wherever you look

Everything comes alive and is just like a book.


I walk through a sparkly gate

That opens onto a magical garden

Beautiful flowers that smell divine

There are unicorns and fairies that are alive

A unicorn comes over to greet me

Tells me to hop on

As there is someone who wants to meet me.


I'm on my way to see the Queen

And that is something that I have never seen

I fly high into the sky and what do I see?

A magical kingdom that is way up high.


Twelve dancing princesses in pretty gowns

And shiny diamonds in their crowns

I see the Queen awaiting me

In a beautiful dress as sparkly as can be

She hands me a beautiful pink rose

And says, 'Two sniffs and you'll be home.'

by Lowri Davies (11)
Ysgol Ifor Bach - Wales

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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