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Where am I? It looks like school

But it's all made from candy, this is so cool

Floors made from icing, walls made from gingerbread

Is this all real or am I dreaming in bed?

A bonbon is rolling down the corridor

Everyone is racing quick for the door

Outside now on the liquorice grass

'Jack,' Josh shouts, 'here comes the pass!'

A shiny gobstopper bright, bright blue

Rolls to my feet and I know what to do

With all my strength I kick the ball

With all of my skill I beat them all.

by Jack Loughran (9)
Liscard Primary School - Merseyside

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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