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Luxury Apartment

I have a luxury apartment,

that's sitting in my dreams,

the walls are made of leather,

they sparkle and they gleam.

Inside there is a bed,

as soft as cotton candy,

the carpets are designed

to look like beaches, warm and sandy.

A dripping chocolate fountain,

a creamy marshmallow mountain

every food of every kind

come see what you can find.

Anything from a kennel

fit for a canine queen

To the neatest garden you've ever seen

You can find it all in my dream.

by Bonnie Yarrow (10)
St Helen's Primary School - Devon

Competition - Once Upon A Dream

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