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Oscar's Adventure Story

One night Ellie was woken by a tapping at her window, it was Spencer the elf!

'Would you like to go on an adventure?' he asked. They flew above the rooftops to a vortex wormhole maker. 'We're at Magic Land,' said Spencer.

Soon they had arrived at Magic Land but it wasn't the same one, it was gloomy, sad and strange.

They needed to break in but they had to be careful they didn't hit the blue magic one.

They dived through to Magic Land with the taser so they did not hit the core.

Then they went to see the emperor and fired the magic button. Everything was so happy again and Ellie and Spencer went home.

by Oscar Lambden (12)
Mayville High School - Hampshire

Competition - My First Story 2016

Copyright remains with the author.