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Devon's Zoo Story

Ellie could see the bright sign for the zoo. A tall, grey elephant stared at Ellie and Spencer the elf. Her name was Nellie and she took them for a ride around the zoo.

Soon, they came across a mummy panda. She was crying. Ellie asked what was up and she told them she had lost two babies. Spencer and Ellie said they would help. The problem was they had to go into a jungle.

They found a big, black, hairy gorilla. The colossal gorilla managed to find one of the cubs and Ellie found the other one having a dip in a pond. They took the cubs back to their caring mother.

Ellie remembered she had to get home for school. Spencer offered her a lift. They said goodbye and Spencer said, 'I will definitely take you out again.'

by Devon Craine (7)
Hoddlesden St Paul's CE Primary School - Lancashire

Competition - My First Story 2016

Copyright remains with the author.