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Esme's Magical Story

As quick as a flash, Ellie and Spencer jumped onto the unicorn. The magic came out of the horn.

They saw a very mean dragon. He breathed lots of fire!

Spencer and Ellie ran away from the dragon with Ellie's little teddy.

Spencer and Ellie went back on the unicorn. She had her little teddy with her.

Ten minutes later, they saw a witch. The witch said, 'Do you want a swirly rainbow lolly?'

'No thank you,' said Spencer and Ellie.

Spencer took Ellie home because it was nearly morning and her mum was nearly awake!


by Esme Keenaghan (6)
Corpus Christi RC Primary School - Leeds

Competition - My First Story 2016

Copyright remains with the author.