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Anna's Magical Story

As Ellie and Spencer were landing in Magical Dreamland, Ellie accidentally put her hands over the unicorn's eyes because she was trying to stop falling off. The unicorn couldn't see where she was going, so they bumped into a sleeping dragon and woke him up!

The dragon shouted, 'How dare you bump into me!'

'I'm sorry Mr Dragon,' said Ellie.

Then Spencer said, 'Is there any way we can cheer you up?'

'There is one way, you could protect me from the witch that keeps stinging me with her wand.'

'OK,' said Spencer.

The dragon kept on crying, so much that he started breathing fire! They were so scared they ran as fast as racing cars to find the unicorn.

'How can we stop the evil witch?' asked Spencer.

The unicorn said, 'I have an idea, hop on.'

Then Ellie said, 'What's the plan?'

'You'll see,' said the unicorn and flew up into the sky.

'Spencer, grab a star.'

So Spencer took a star.

'Now let's go and find that witch.'

Suddenly, Ellie spotted the evil witch and they crept up behind her.

The unicorn whispered, 'Spencer, jump and grab the wand.'

So Spencer got the wand. The unicorn attached the star to the wand and before the witch could get them, she turned into a good witch. They went to tell the dragon.

He said, 'Thank you.'

Then Spencer said, 'It's time to go home.'

Ellie said, 'Goodbye.'

Because she was now a good witch, she let them have a ride home on her broomstick.

'Hang on Teddy,' said Ellie.

They all lived happily ever after.

by Anna Von Benecke (6)
Woodley CE Primary School - Reading

Competition - My First Story 2016

Copyright remains with the author.