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Sunset And Sea

Shimmering sand is as hot as the sun.

Urchins are very spiky and dangerous.

Noisy children shout on the beach, eating toast.

Splashing sharks are very dangerous.

Electric eels are very nasty.

Turtles swim with their legs.


Amazing Alfie explores the cold, deep blue sea.

Nasty sharks that live under the sea.

Down under the sea I can hear an octopus.


Shimmering sand shines along the beach.

Ella looks at the yellow sand.

Amazing creatures run around the beach.

by Daniel Wang (6)
Amberley Primary School, Newcastle Upon Tyne

Competition - Sense Poetry

Copyright remains with the author.