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The Fishy Sea

As I walk along the sandy beach,
Wearing my favourite dress of peach,
I feel the silky water swirling at my feet,
The sun beats down on my face with heat,
As I look down at my reflection in the sea,
And I see the beautiful angelfish gliding in and out
Of the colourful coral,
I close my eyes as I imagine
The salty fishy smell of fish and chips,
I slide down the sea passage,
I land on a soft chair in the underwater restaurant,
As I eat my fish and chips,
And taste a salty morsel of yummy fish,
I hear the waves gently
Splashing against the beach.

by Vita Braden (7)
The Gower School, London

Competition - Sense Poetry

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