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At Death's Door

Death starts with the sting of a bee
A heap of lost memories and a taste of tears
When a dark shadow shows
A bodiless soul
A broken heart
The loss of life
You need someone to comfort you
There's nobody left, there's no hope left
Happiness has disappeared
A loud scream is all you can hear
Death is like a never-ending hallway
You can't escape death
A dark sky forms around you.


by Michaela Villon (9)
St Patrick's Catholic Primary School, Birmingham

Competition - Poetry Emotions

Copyright remains with the author.