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The Spanish

Everyone was shouting, everyone stood watching. Watching a fleet of ships sailing towards them. Miyu, a little boy, was wondering who the strange people were. He asked the priest, 'What's going to happen?'
'I don't know, my friend. But they are not familiar with our kind.'
The ships looked like birds to Miyu, but he realised they could be dangerous. Word had spread across the city fast, and by now everyone was staring. As the waves slammed into the rocky cliffs, they came closer. After this nothing would ever be the same again...


by Thomas Gilroy (WInner) (11)
St Andrew's CE (VA) Junior School, Brighouse

Competition - Ancient Adventures

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