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Morgan's Under The Sea Story

 

Splash! Sally Seahorse, Colin Crab, Sarah Starfish and Peter the Pufferfish were on their way home from sea school when a loud noise interrupted their conversation. Peter looked started and said, 'Did you hear that?'

Sally said, 'Probably another sea friend coming to join us.' But was it?

Peter looked worried. Colin told his friends to follow him, he had found an old boat with a hole in it, big enough to hide in.

The water grew darker and a large image came towards them. 'It is a diver,' whispered Colin.

'A diver!' screeched Peter.

'Shh!' whispered Sarah.

He was carrying a torch and a net.

They decided to swim further inside the boat. They bumped into Olly the Octopus. The diver was getting closer. Olly sprawled out his eight gangly legs and his friends swam behind him, Olly looked nervous but took control and wrapped his legs around the net, pulling it out of the diver's hand. Olly was the hero!

 

Splash! Sally Seahorse, Colin Crab, Sarah Starfish and Peter the Pufferfish were on their way home from sea school when a loud noise interrupted their conversation. Peter looked started and said, 'Did you hear that?'

Sally said, 'Probably another sea friend coming to join us.' But was it?

Peter looked worried. Colin told his friends to follow him, he had found an old boat with a hole in it, big enough to hide in.

The water grew darker and a large image came towards them. 'It is a diver,' whispered Colin.

'A diver!' screeched Peter.

'Shh!' whispered Sarah.

He was carrying a torch and a net.

They decided to swim further inside the boat. They bumped into Olly the Octopus. The diver was getting closer. Olly sprawled out his eight gangly legs and his friends swam behind him, Olly looked nervous but took control and wrapped his legs around the net, pulling it out of the diver's hand. Olly was the hero!

 

by Morgan Keeble (7)
Parsloes Primary School


Competition - My First Story Ocean Adventures

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