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Matteo's Boating Adventure

The Spence family were on a fishing trip during the summer holidays. They had been on the lake for a long time and had not caught any fish. They were starting to get tired and hungry.
Suddenly, Max was pulled into the water. Whatever it was that dragged him in must have been very
big and strong.
Max climbed back into the boat. Now it was Daddy's turn to take up the challenge. What kind of monster could this be? they all thought.
Little Sofia was now joining in and all three of them were pulling as hard as they could.
'Got you!' they shouted. 'Oops, sorry Mum, we forgot you went scuba diving!'

by Matteo Spence (7)
St Mary Of The Angels RC Primary School, London

Competition - My First Story Ocean Adventures

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