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Terror In The Night

People were screaming and babies were crying
I woke with a shock
I could see thick smoke swirling in my room
Out of my window flames were dancing
Houses were glowing red
I could hear wood popping and cracking
Fire!
My legs began to wobble
I was terrified
I had to escape
Quickly I climbed onto the roof
Flickering flames everywhere
Fire!
Choking black smoke twisting over roofs
Fire!
Fire as mesmerising as hot bubbling lava
Ash floating in the hot wind
Fire!

by Ralph Campbell (6)
Sidcup


Competition - Sense Poetry

Copyright remains with the author.